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Learn the best way to add examples to your essay to support your ideas. You need to use a range of linking words in your essay and also use them flexibly in different locations in the sentence. See below for a list of useful linking words with sample sentences:

Linking Words for Giving Examples

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate
  • as an illustration
  • to give a clear example
  • take, for example,
  • such as
  • namely

Video Tutorial: How to Add Examples in an Essay

 

Sample Sentences with Supporting Examples

Please note that the linking words do not need to be at the start of the sentence. You can use them more flexibly by changing their location.

Global warming should be taken more serious as it can result in a number of disastrous consequences. To give a clear example, the melting polar ice caps have not only caused a loss of habitat for polar bears but are also threatening seas levels worldwide.

More and more women are choosing to start a family later in life. 20% of women giving birth to their first child, for instance, are over the age of 30 in the UK.

Crimes should not have the same punishment. Minor crimes, such as pick pocketing and traffic offences, should not have the same penalty as major crimes, namely murder and manslaughter.

Children often learn behaviour from the adults around them subconsciously. To illustrate, around 50% of children who are brought up by aggressive parents often use aggression to solve their own problems later in life.

Parents should be responsible for teaching their children right and wrong. If, for example, they see their child using bad language, they should spend time explaining to their child the serious consequences that can result from this type of behaviour.

More and more people are leading sedentary life styles due to work conditions. Take, for example, office workers in the UK who spend at least 8 hours a day, 5 days a week  sitting in front of their computers.

All Linking Words for Essay Writing

You can find a list of all linking words that can be used in essay writing: Linking Words for Writing.

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You are required to write a 1200-1600 word essay on a title set by the IB. The essays for 2013 graduation are here:

May 2013 TOK titles

TOK essays May 2014

Mr Langston’s Essay 5 and 6 Keynote

You may not change the title in any way. You should aim for 1600 words, as shorter essays rarely meet all the criteria.

The full essay criteria are here:    Assessment Criteria ESSAY

There is also a useful summary here:  Essay criteria breakdown

You are going to use this  essay_template to start thinking about your essay. You will need to turn this in next week.

This summary will help you structure your essay – TOK Essay Plan Template

Please download and use one or ALL of these planning sheets to help you get started.

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Planning Sheet ToK Essay copy

One way of approaching your TOK essay

Essay Planning Form

 

Your cover page for final submission MUST look like this:

 

Here is a very good exemplar essay, together with the IB’s comments and marks.

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Example 1 Marks

 

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essay 10 marks

 

TOK essay: for the LAST time!

  • Have you read and understood all the different criteria for assessment? Really?

  • Does your essay number between 1200 and 1600 words? (it should be far nearer 1600 than 1200!)

  • Have you organized your essay into an introduction, 2-3 examples, and a conclusion?

  • Is your introduction concise, with a discussion of what the title means, and a brief plan of how your essay will tackle the question?

  • Are your knowledge issues organized CLEARLY (using linking sentences) into arguments and counterclaims?

  • Have you referred explicitly to the different AOKs and WOKs, and provided links between them?

  • Have you used personal examples, specifically from your experiences as an ‘IB learner’, and avoided hypothetical ones?

  • Have you used well-referenced examples that you have found out about from beyond the classroom (articles, documentaries, books, the ideas of thinkers, etc.)?

  • Have you considered other perspectives and points of view?

  • Have you identified implications of your arguments and some of the counterclaims?

  • Is your conclusion consistent with the rest of your essay?

Yes, to all of these? If so, you’ve done  great job. If not, go back and do a great job!

 Other essay resources

Six steps to writ­ing a good TOK essay: A stu­dent guide by Colleen H. Parker at SPHS

Writ­ing a TOK essay, by Richard van de Lagemaat

How to Write a Good TOK Essay, By Peg Robinson

This in link TheoryofKnowledgeStudent.com goes through a vari­ety of exam­ples of how to answer some of the ques­tions from pre­vi­ous years.

Mr Hoyes’ Notes on The ToK Essay

How to Write a Good ToK Paper, from Col­lec­tive Thinking

Writ­ing a TOK Essay, from ‘Find­ings’ Part One, Two, Three, Four, and Five.

10 Tips on Writ­ing a Good The­ory of Knowl­edge Essay, from the Amer­i­can Inter­na­tional School of Lusaka

Guide to writ­ing the TOK Essay, from IBCram

Tips for writ­ing a good ToK Essay by Ric Sims @ Noth­ing Nerdy

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